Explainer / Published 2026-10-31

Authors are dropping em dashes to avoid looking like AI

Writers are changing punctuation and adding typos as AI detectors like Pangram influence how prose is judged, including work written without any AI at all.

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THE SHORT VERSION

  • AI detection tools such as Pangram are influencing how authors write, with writers avoiding punctuation and phrasing the tools associate with machine text.
  • Some authors add deliberate typos to appear human, a pattern documented in reporting on detector scores.
  • The pressure has produced complaints that avoiding supposed AI patterns can flatten prose rooted in other languages and cultures.

The habits writers are dropping

AI detection has moved beyond catching machine-written text and started changing how people write even when they never used a model. Techmeme summarised Bloomberg reporting on how tools such as Pangram are reshaping prose: authors are dropping em dashes and the not-X-but-Y construction, avoiding words like delve, and in some cases adding typos to look more human.

Digital Trends reported the same shift in more detail, describing writers who now deliberately make mistakes because, apparently, good prose looks like AI. The habits being abandoned are not random: they are the stylistic tics that detectors have learned to associate with generated text.

The case that made it concrete

The argument stopped being abstract when a novel was withdrawn. Digital Trends reported that a book by author Ballard was withdrawn by publisher Hachette in March after it received a 78.3 percent AI-written score from Pangram, that Ballard denied using AI to write the novel, and that she said her editor may have used the technology without her knowledge.

The scores did not stop there. The same report said Pangram gave the first chapter of Ballard's Poly, which she says she wrote by hand, a 100 percent AI-generated score, and that an earlier novel received 83 percent. A detector that returns those numbers on hand-written work is not measuring authorship; it is measuring how closely a text resembles the patterns it was trained on.

Why detectors produce false positives

AI detectors are classifiers, and classifiers work by similarity. They score text against patterns common in generated writing, which include certain connectives, balanced sentence structures and particular punctuation habits. A human writer who happens to share those habits gets punished for them, and the punishment is a number attached to their name.

That is why the false-positive problem is structural rather than a bug to be fixed. The features that make a detector useful are the same features that make it unreliable at the margin, and the margin is where most professional writing lives, because professional writing is edited toward consistency.

The cost of writing for a score

The visible cost is stylistic. Writers who avoid em dashes and parallel constructions are removing tools from their kit for reasons that have nothing to do with clarity, and the result can be prose that is technically safer and worse to read. Digital Trends quoted warnings that avoiding supposed AI patterns could flatten prose rooted in other languages and cultures, which is a serious charge for a publishing industry that says it wants more voices.

The less visible cost is trust. If an author's manuscript can be flagged at 100 percent by an automated tool, then the burden shifts from the accuser to the writer, who has to prove a negative about their own process. That is a bad position for anyone whose work depends on their reputation.

Why publishers keep using them

Publishers have reasons to use detectors beyond paranoia. They are being asked to guarantee that books are not model output, and an automated score is a defensible artefact to put in a file if a dispute arises later. The problem is that the score is being treated as evidence when it is closer to a weather forecast.

The result is a split incentive: the publisher wants a number it can point to, and the author wants a process that assumes good faith. Neither is unreasonable, and the current arrangement resolves the tension in favour of the party with more power in the contract.

What a detector is actually measuring

A detector is not reading a mind; it is computing the probability that a sequence of words resembles the distribution a model produces. That probability is a useful signal when the text is long and generic and a weak one when the text is short, edited or stylistically distinctive. Most of what authors are now avoiding is distinctive style.

The other thing a detector measures is its own training set. If a publisher's editors have spent a decade polishing prose toward a house style, and that house style overlaps with the features detectors learned from models, the house style becomes a liability. That is not a hypothetical: the withdrawn novel was edited before it was scored.

The contract question nobody has settled

Authors' contracts were written for a world where the question was whether a person wrote the book, and the remedy was a warranty from the author. A detector score turns that warranty into a number that the author cannot see before signing and cannot challenge after delivery.

The practical fix would be disclosure: say which tool is used, what score triggers review, and what a writer can do about it. None of that appears in the reporting, which suggests the industry is adopting the technology faster than it is writing the rules for it.

What is established, and what is not

Established: AI detectors are influencing how authors write; writers report avoiding em dashes, certain constructions and words associated with AI, and some add typos; a novel was withdrawn after a detector score; detectors have returned very high scores on work the author says was hand-written; critics warn the effect can flatten prose from other linguistic traditions. Not established: how accurate detectors are across genres and languages, whether publishers disclose their use, and whether any of this changes contracts.

For readers, the useful signal is that the detection layer is now part of the writing process, whether or not a writer uses AI. This site has covered the copyright fight over training data, the crawling opt-out standard publishers are backing and the dispute over AI and employee data; all three are about who gets to decide what counts as legitimate use of text.

Sources & reporting limits

  1. Techmeme: How AI detectors like Pangram are changing human writing
  2. Writers are now deliberately making mistakes because, apparently, good prose looks like AI
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